An Interview with Helen Yoxall Burns

Carleton and The Christmas Grump: Launch Date 8th December 2023

Helen releases her second book today in The Carleton Mouse Book Series – Empowering Our Children series – Carleton and the Christmas Grump. She talks to us about how the first book in the series propelled her to write this instalment and the impact the book has had.

This is your second book in the Carleton the Mouse series. Were you under pressure from your fans to create another book?

I was pleasantly surprised at all the ‘book number two’ questions! I thought once I’d ticked my bucket list of writing a children’s picture book, my inner voice would be satisfied—but no! So, the pressure to create another book came from within. Writing the first book opened so many opportunities for me. It was and still is a huge learning curve. I’ve made some lovely industry mentors and contacts, and naturally, I wanted to evolve as a writer and evolve Carleton Mouse. It was an organic process.

How was the last book, Carleton’s Motto Saves the Grotto, received last year?

More than I ever imagined. As Carleton Mouse is the actual school mascot for Carleton House Preparatory School in South Liverpool, the face-to-face feedback from families has been amazing. I’ve had parents tell me their children request it nightly as their bedtime read throughout the year, several children, locally, dressed up as Carleton Mouse for World Book Day, and one little pre-schooler visited the school gates to see where Carleton lives! It was a delight to receive feedback from children and families unrelated to the school, which was a dream come true to hear my little protagonist appeals to all, which was my main goal. Amazing Amazon reviews from Dubai, America and Canada were the icing on the cake!

Where do your ideas come from?

Being a mum to two happy and clever-witted little girls, I am surrounded by inspiration! Our daily conversations spark so many ideas, anything from a funny throwaway comment to something eventful in their lives. I love getting down to their level and thinking back to my childhood and what was important to me growing up.

What was the inspiration for this new story?

As a child, I was often told by grown-ups that I was shy. I remember starting my Accounting Technician Apprenticeship at 16 and the office manager announcing to my colleagues that as I was so shy, that the day when I did speak would be something of fundamental importance. Well, that just made me clam up more! Internally, I really did want to join in, as I didn’t particularly think I was shy, but the label started to define me. With my own inner circle, I was a different story, so I wanted to share the message that we can be any type of emotion or feeling on any day of the week, which is fine! My mum and her mum, my Nana Emmeline, were advocates of not labelling children, and this was my inspiration.

Both of your books have had a Christmas theme? Why is this?

Accidental, I think! Firstly, I adore Christmastime, so I may be subconsciously drawn to this theme. The writing possibilities are endless with lyrical descriptions and vivid imagery; it’s easy to get absorbed in the magic. I enjoy reading books where the message is so subtle the reader hardly realises there is a message, and I feel a Christmas setting is a lovely place to do this.

Last year, Carleton’s Motto Saves the Grotto coincided with The Carleton Mouse Reader Night, which is an annual event celebrated in school in November, so it was a timely factor. This year, I attended the Write Mentor ‘Write Rhyme’ 6-week online course led by author Catherine Emmett in September. Submitting work each week to a supportive critique group, I got my writing mojo back. It was a personal challenge to try and turn a piece of homework into a book! And just like last year, the story snowballed into an idea that together, we (illustrator Jared Burki, school, TAUK Publishing) could pull off the magic again. It was fitting to have Carleton’s prequel set at Christmastime again.

Do you plan out your story first, or just let it flow?

Being an ultra-methodical person, I think my writing style surprised me – I am a bit of a ‘Pantser’ (a fly-by-the-seat-of-my-pants writer). I always begin with a message that I am super passionate about and take it from there. In this case, my original protagonist was a mouse called Mabel No Label. The story had been ‘put on ice’ until I had the lightbulb moment that Mabel had to be Carleton instead. Picture book writers must follow a certain element of planning, for example, when to introduce the main character, any uh-oh moments, and ta-dah moments. But overall, I enjoy running with different ideas and going with the flow until my gut says so!

When you are not writing, what else do you do? 

As previously mentioned, I’m a mum to two young daughters. Their school, extra-curricular activities and social lives keep me on my toes! It doesn’t leave much time for me, but the time that I do have, I enjoy running or reformer Pilates for that little bit of head space. Or giving Mrs Hinch a run for her money—oh, the glamour!

Raising money and awareness for Cancer Research UK

What did you read growing up?

Anything by Enid Blyton: The Famous Five, The Secret Seven, Malory Towers, Amelia Jane, The Enchanted Wood, St Clare’s– to name a few. I shared a bedroom with my twin sister—one early bird and one night owl did not bode well, so I used to hang out of my single bed to catch the landing light through the crack of the bedroom door so I could read in the dark!

I remember having to learn and recite a Roald Dahl poem in primary school. The poem was ‘The Cow’—and I was immediately captivated by the humour, rhythm, and rhyme. Roald Dahl was another big inspiration growing up.

Any advice for a new author?

Keep learning! My New Year’s resolution is to attend as many writing courses as I can this year. It’s the best way to keep me motivated. Otherwise, life does get in the way. Social media is a great place to engage with the writing community. And shop local! I remember buying Jude Lennon’s book, The Dragon of Allerton Oak, at a local community centre whilst at a playgroup with my eldest daughter when she was a baby. Jude made me realise that the writing dream is attainable with hard work, determination and the proper guidance.

Author Jude Lennon supporting Helen over a cuppa

Is the book how you imagined it to be?

Completely! I’m so grateful to illustrator Jared Burki and delighted we could work together again. To create a character who is loved and recognised by so many children is something Jared should be very proud of. From Sarah Fountain, who designed the spectacular cover and interior layout, to Estelle Maher, for her expertise and guidance, and the high-quality cover and internal pages from Custom Print, it really was a team effort. I think our efforts shine through!

If you could pick anyone to read your story on Jackanory, who would it be?

If I can hypothetically pick someone who is no longer here (and in keeping with the ‘local’ theme), then I’d say John Lennon. Carleton Mouse seeks to empower his little readers, and I think Mr. Lennon would approve. Plus, their homes do share the same side on Menlove Avenue. Maybe Carleton’s next supporting character could be a beetle…

If I’m allowed to manifest a real reader on Jackanory, I’d say Hugh Grant, purely for his dulcet English accent (ahem)!

Are you writing anything else?

Carleton and the Christmas Grump is book number two in The Carleton Mouse Book Series – Empowering Our Children. It’s a series of books aimed at empowering children during the trials and tribulations of growing up, themed around overcoming obstacles and becoming stronger and more confident in navigating childhood. I have a few work-in-progresses and ideas to revisit to make a start on book three.

Will there be any more adventures for Carleton?

Yes! I’m excited to see where Carleton Mouse and his determination lead me next. I think Carleton also flies by the seat of his pants, so your guess is as good as mine. Wherever he is next, he will bring the magic!

Helen with Estelle at a recent Literary Lunch with Carleton Mouse joining the fun.

What was the best thing about working with TAUK Publishing?

Estelle Maher, Managing Director of TAUK, is an author herself, so as well as the expertise and guidance I’ve already mentioned, there is warmth and empathy from Estelle for writers wanting to fulfil their writing ambition. TAUK is a lovely community; I’ve been fortunate to meet some amazing people online and at events, and the support from TAUK really does continue long after publication day.

Carleton and the Christmas Grump is now available here.

Also available from Helen Yoxall Burns

Happy International Women’s Day

📣 Happy International Women’s Day! 📣

“On the other end, Carleton and Daisy took flight, to the bus stop, the post box, the red traffic light.”

Every good plot has a main character (protagonist or antagonist) with a supporting role character.

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A strong female 💪🏻 supporting the main character to succeed in their goal.

With quiet strength, fierce loyalty, and zero ego with an empathetic heart, Daisy epitomises the women we celebrate today.

Sometimes we’re the main character, sometimes we’re the support. Either way:

Be like Daisy. Support your tribe.

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A Piece of Paradise – My Barbados

After recently returning from Barbados from a wonderfully de-frazzling half term break, I was delighted to be asked by Queen of Resort Wear, Helen Beck of Pink Waters, to guest blog about Barbados on her fabulous site. Helen has kindly offered all readers a 10% discount code on Pink Waters using the OHMYWORDS code at the online checkout.

I first fell head-over-heels with beautiful Barbados in January 2005.  Pre-marriage, pre-children and pre-flight fizz booked, my now-husband and my twenty-something-self set off on our no-responsibilities package holiday to the platinum coast. Two whole weeks as part of the ‘fly and flop’ set. (Who even were we?!).  As it so happens, my first visit to the tropical island was pretty much spent dodging rainstorms, so fly-and-flop was replaced with eat-till-you-pop. At which we were experts! We got to sample many delicious delights of the island, ranging from high-end (dining gems on the west coast such as Carambola and Calabaza – sadly no longer operating, and The Cliff – still going as superbly strong as the locally distilled and world famous rum) to Bajan street food of rotis and fish cakes.

Luckily, Barbados is not just all about clear waters and sugar-soft sand, (although it helps!), so despite the atypical weather I’d packed from Blighty, it’s safe to say I’d caught the Barbados Bug (and by that, I don’t mean the pesky mosquito). I fell in love with the island’s beauty (fringed palm trees, vibrant sunrises and pastel sunsets), the warmth and charm of the locals and the slow pace of life (as a now busy mum of two, this ever-so-relaxed-pace appeals all the more on our return visits).

Sugar Hill Barbados

Returning in 2011 (now married, still pre-children) and with the help of t’intenet, we abandoned the packaged holiday in favour for villa accommodation.  The Sugar Hill Estate within the St James parish is a collection of luxurious properties spread over 50 stunning acres and it was our first peep into paradise.  Nestled within acres of the island’s most magnificent manicured gardens, Sugar Hill is a five minute drive from all amenities of Holetown including beaches, luxurious hotels, restaurants, supermarket, Lime Grove Lifestyle Centre (home to designer boutiques, restaurants and cinema) and a medical centre.

Did You Know?

Barbados is split into 11 parishes (districts) and 10 of them are named after saints, each with its unique character and special attractions. St. Lucy (being the one and only female), St. Peter, St. Andrew, St. James, St. Joseph, St. George, St. Thomas, St. John, St. Michael, St. Philip and last but not least, Christ Church.  We like to test ourselves on the 10 parishes whilst sampling a chilled 10 Saints beer!  Along with the infamous Banks, is it definitely one (ice-bucket) for the tick-list.

Getting Around

Our go-to is St. James/St. Peter on the west coast, but the whole island is accessible to explore by car, bus, water taxis and island tours. Hiring a car is an excellent way to explore Barbados. There are many reputable car rental companies on the island.  We like to collect our hire car at the airport upon arrival but most companies offer a free delivery and pick up service also. 

Sandy Lane

Eat

Holidaying with a young family, our trips may include a little less wining and dining these days (ahem). Nightly dinner dates are replaced with lazy poolside or beachfront lunches.  Early al fresco breakfasts are followed by beach strolls (sigh).  And when the jet lag has waned, our girly-girls love to dress up for dinner, (what’s in the cat!). Here’s a pick of our current faves, (all with spectacular views):

All Day Dining

The Deck at Sugar Hill, (Holetown, St. James), Lone Star (Mount Standfast, St. James), Fish Pot (Speightstown, St. Peter)

Beach Vibe

SeaShed (Mullins Beach, St. Peter)

Farm to Table Experience

Local & Co (Speightstown, St. Peter), La Cabane (Batts Rock)

Afternoon Tea

Sandy Lane Hotel (St. James)

Luxury Fine Dining

The Cliff (Derricks, St. James),  The Tides (Holetown, St. James)

Dinner Barbados

Beaches

The west coast of the island boasts calm, shallow waters of the Caribbean sea, while the Atlantic-facing east side and its rugged coastline is perfect for riding the large, rolling waves.

Alleyne’s Bay situated on the west coast is a popular beauty spot.  The sparkling, warm waters are perfect for swimming, snorkelling and sundowners.  Local beach bars and restaurants include Ju Ju’s and Lone Star.

Sandy Lane beach is perfect for celeb-spotting during a barefoot stroll along the shore (it is also the platinum playground for guests staying at the hotel so public access can be tricky).

Sea

No trip is complete without chartering a catamaran tour.  Indulge in a private or intimate shared cruise onboard a luxury catamaran.  With transport to and from your accommodation, enjoy either a morning or afternoon cruise sailing the seas, with pitstops to snorkel, swim with turtles or simply enjoy the wind in your hair with a drink in hand.  Anchor up for a delicious lunch and feel your shoulders loosen!

Island Friends

The Green Monkey is a common sight on the island and quite often a troop of mischievous monkeys will meander through the gardens of hotels or private villas!  Locals believe that Green Monkey came from Senegal and the Gambia in West Africa 350 years ago. These monkeys are friendly and playful – a fascinating watch!

Barbados Monkeys

Garrison Savannah Racecourse

The Barbados Turf Club, which regulates and promotes horse racing in Barbados, was established in 1905 and organises three seasons of racing per year. With approximately 25 race meetings throughout the year running from January to April (Spring Season); May to September (Summer Season) and from November to December (Winter Season).

The Garrison Savannah has been the home of horse racing in Barbados since 1845.

Pebbles Beach Equine Experience

Set your alarm! One of the island’s best kept secrets is the sunrise swim of local racehorses. Early morning, following a race meeting, trainers take their horses to the beach for a swim on Pebbles Beach (Carlisle Bay, just south of Bridgetown). If you’ve never seen horses swimming before then you are in for a treat!  The event takes place between 5.30am and 7am most days.

So almost two decades on, (we’re practically Bajan, right?) I’m now head-over-flats-than-heels as I was on my first visit.  But as my own personal style has evolved, Barbados has too. It definitely has a bit more sophistication than the mid-naughties, but more charm and beauty than ever.  With their abundance of vitamin D, nourishing nature, fresh food and laissez-faire approach, Barbados is winning at life.

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Palm Sugar Villa at Sugar Hill

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An Interview with Helen Yoxall Burns

“TAUK Publishing has had the pleasure of helping Helen and Jared launch their book today, Carleton’s Motto Saves the Grotto, which is now available on Amazon. Read our interview and discover why being sociable at the school gates can change your life.”

Tell us about Carleton the mouse.

Carleton Mouse is the actual school mascot of Carleton House Preparatory School in South Liverpool.

In this story, Carleton is a miniature mouse with a huge heart and one very big problem—Santa’s school visit could be ruined by snow! Without revealing any spoilers, the essence of this Christmas tale is how Carleton and his friends discover how a little idea can snowball into great things.

Carleton lives within the school and roams the classrooms long after home time, so the children or teachers haven’t met him as yet. He wears an identical grey school uniform, and although he is a boy, he could represent any child from the school with his strong qualities. He is a determined mouse with the power to overcome obstacles with self-belief and ambition. He is a good friend with (mostly) a supportive network of friends around him too, with all the ingredients that add to the recipe of the school motto, ‘They Can Because They Think They Can’.

Carleton House Preparatory School

How did the story come about? 

The Carleton Mouse Reader Night is a school event celebrated annually, except for the last couple of years. To celebrate its relaunch (post-2020), I was delighted and honoured to be asked to pay homage to the school mascot by writing a heart-warming Christmas tale in rhyme. In 2017, I wrote a poem for the Carleton House preschool, so my passion for writing in rhyme is known. As a member of the PTA, I am heavily involved in planning events for the school, so it felt quite organic to progress to writing a story about it too.

What is the most important element for you? Character, story, rhyme or illustrations?

I feel for a picture book to be successful, all elements must be represented equally. If the rhyme does not flow, that will detract from the story arc, and likewise, if the character is not relatable or likeable, excellent rhythm and rhyme won’t matter if the reader cannot connect with the character. To get every element spot on in under 700 words is a big task! Illustrations equally bring all of the above to life. My passion is rhyme which initially brought me to writing children’s books, but rhyme alone will fail if all the other elements aren’t there.

Was it important that it had a Christmas theme?

The Christmas theme was a timely factor due to the event being held in November. However, it certainly did add to the magical message and plot. What was important was that the story had a theme to which all children could relate—believing in oneself. To me, boosting children’s self-confidence following the last couple of turbulent years is more important than ever.

You used your own illustrator. How do you know him? 

I met Jared Burki and his family in the preschool about five years ago. A small group of parents collected their children at 1 pm each day, so it was a less chaotic pick-up which gave us time to chat, and he was one of them. We discovered we had a mutual creative interest in creating children’s books. I wanted to write professionally, and Jared wanted to be a children’s illustrator. We agreed we should pursue our dreams and maybe, one day, even work together. It’s amazing that our chat came to fruition and led us both down this exciting path.

Jared and Helen

Have you always been writing?

Yes! Funnily enough, only recently, my mum reminded me of a school poetry competition I’d won at St Julies High School in October 1994. I still have the photograph of my prize—an anthology of love poems, proudly displayed on my Instagram grid! It’s always been a passion of mine, and I guess this boost led me to write bespoke poetry professionally for special occasions such as wedding speeches, which I started 20 years ago (I’m showing my age now!).

You’re watching TV and wish you were part of the writing team. What are you watching? Explain what it is about the writing you like.

Gosh! As a busy mum of two, I really don’t get any chance to watch TV. I think the last thing that gripped me was BBC’s Line of Duty. The writing was so fast-paced with technical police knowledge and so many twists and turns that I’d have to say that. Plus, I’m a fan of Liverpool actor Stephen Graham so that’d be a bonus too!

What would you write if you couldn’t write children’s picture books?

I’d probably be a lyricist! In 2010 and 2011, I entered the UK Songwriting Contest and won two semi-finalist certificates and a commended entry. My husband and I were married in 2009 and Matt Johnson from One True Voice (from Pop Stars the Rivals TV show) sang at our wedding. He noticed my poetry as wedding favours for our guests and asked if I’d ever thought of writing song lyrics. I think I’d like to pick that up again! It all works back to rhythm and metre required in picture book writing, so it’s all connected.

Why did you choose TAUK Publishing?

I attended Jude Lennon’s Creative Writing Course in October 2020. It was on my agenda to join in 2017, but my daughters were babies then, and I backed out last minute as the evening courses did not suit their bedtimes. During the 2020 course, Sue Miller of TAUK Publishing made a guest appearance and I was intrigued. Since then, I have attended many writing courses and connected online with Jude. I reached out to Jude to ask for advice on this project and the rest, as they say, is history! I had also attempted to attend the TAUK Writing Retreat earlier in the year, but my daughter was poorly. Carleton Mouse wasn’t on my radar then. I believe everything happens for a reason.

Have you learned anything while on your publishing journey?

This has been an absolute eye-opener and a huge learning curve from start to finish. That, in itself, is invaluable.

Will there be any more adventures for Carleton?

Oh, I certainly hope so! From the amazing feedback from the Carleton House families, it sounds like a sequel could be on the cards. Carleton Mouse has many class mascot friends, so there’s room for a host of spin-offs! And in the ethos of the school, why not?! They Can Because They Think They Can!

South Liverpool School Celebrates Launch of New Children’s Book

Carleton House Preparatory School will celebrate the soft launch of an illustrated children’s book featuring their own school mascot, Carleton Mouse, with a special in-house event for school children and families this month.

The fantastically festive Christmas adventure is the product of an exciting collaboration between local author Helen Yoxall Burns and local illustrator, Jared Burki.

To celebrate the relaunch of the school’s annual Carleton Mouse Reader Night event, Helen Yoxall Burns said “I was delighted and honoured to pay homage to the school mascot through a heart-warming Christmas tale. Like Carleton Mouse’s idea, our project snowballed from a little concept into something huge! The magical message of the story is relatable to all children and the illustrations are simply stunning.”

Jared Burki added “With my art, I hope to inspire young minds as they explore and experience worlds of wonder.”

Published by TAUK Publishing, the paperback will launch on Amazon 17th November. Pre-orders for Kindle will be available from 20th November 2022.

The paperback will retail at £7.99 and £1 of every book sale at the event will be donated to the Carleton House Preparatory PTA fund.

Helen concluded “I adore writing stories sprinkled with a magical message and I am grateful Carleton House gave us this opportunity to bring their magnificent mascot to life.”

Blurb

Carleton Mouse is a miniature mouse with a huge heart and one very big problem: Santa’s school visit could be ruined by snow! But how can Carleton’s school motto save the school grotto? 

Join Carleton and his friends as they discover how a little idea can snowball into great things.

They Can Because They Think They Can…

ENDS